Secrets, Searches and Discoveries

The Letter Waiting in the West · Chapter 3 of 6

Chapter 3

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Gideon extinguished the last visible ember of lamplight, but the stove still painted a faint orange glow across the cabin floor.

Outside, a horse snorted.

Leather creaked.

Someone laughed.

Abigail crouched behind the thick table.

Gideon stood beside the door with his rifle held low.

“Gideon,” the man outside called. “No reason to be unfriendly.”

Gideon did not answer.

“We heard you brought yourself a wife.”

Abigail looked toward him.

Even in darkness, she saw his jaw tighten.

Another voice laughed.

“Big one too.”

The old humiliation struck Abigail almost automatically.

Then Gideon opened the door.

Her breath stopped.

He stepped onto the porch with the rifle.

“What do you want?”

Abigail could not see the riders clearly, but she heard the amusement leave their voices.

The first man answered.

“Mr. Vane wants to welcome your guest.”

“She doesn't need welcoming.”

“She might need information.”

“She has all she needs.”

“Does she?”

A long pause.

Then the stranger said, “Tell Abigail Whitaker that Amos Vane would like a word.”

Abigail shut her eyes.

They knew her full name.

Gideon's voice became colder.

“You've delivered the message.”

“Not exactly.”

Metal clicked outside.

A revolver being cocked.

Abigail's fear changed shape.

She had come west prepared to be unwanted.

She had not come prepared to watch someone die because of her.

Before Gideon could stop her, she stood.

“Abigail,” he warned.

She crossed to the doorway.

Three men sat on horseback.

The one in the red scarf was the man from Bitter Creek.

Moonlight showed narrow features and a mustache.

His smile widened when he saw her.

“Miss Whitaker.”

“Mrs. Miller, soon enough,” Gideon said.

The man glanced at him.

“Not yet, I hear.”

Abigail felt the implication.

Unprotected woman.

Unmarried.

No family.

No allies.

She stepped beside Gideon anyway.

“What does Amos Vane want?”

Red Scarf smiled.

“Only to straighten out a misunderstanding concerning some property.”

“Then he may send a lawyer.”

The other riders shifted.

Red Scarf's smile thinned.

“You've got your father's mouth.”

Abigail's fingers went cold.

“You knew him?”

“Knew of him.”

“My father was shot.”

“So I've heard.”

Gideon took one step forward.

The rider's hand moved away from his gun.

Red Scarf lifted both palms.

“Easy. We're only talking.”

“Then talk.”

“Mr. Vane says Caleb Whitaker stole papers that didn't belong to him. If those papers have found their way into Miss Whitaker's possession, returning them would prevent considerable unpleasantness.”

Abigail stared.

“My father said Amos Vane was the thief.”

“Dead men say many things.”

“My father cannot say anything now.”

The man shrugged.

“That is generally the disadvantage of being dead.”

Gideon raised the rifle.

“Ride.”

Red Scarf's horse backed up.

The other two men reached for their reins.

“You don't want trouble, Miller.”

“I don't have trouble.”

Gideon's eyes were flat.

“I have trespassers.”

For several seconds nobody moved.

Then Red Scarf spat into the dirt.

“We'll see you in town, Miss Whitaker.”

Abigail's skin crawled.

He turned his horse.

The three riders disappeared between the pines.

Gideon stayed outside listening until the hoofbeats faded.

Then he closed the door and barred it.

Abigail stood near the table.

“You shouldn't have gone outside,” he said.

“You shouldn't have opened the door.”

“They needed to see me.”

“They needed to know I am not hiding behind you.”

Gideon looked at her.

“This isn't Pennsylvania.”

“No. In Pennsylvania people insulted me over teacups. Apparently Wyoming uses revolvers.”

Against all reason, Gideon's mouth twitched.

Abigail noticed.

“You almost smiled.”

“No.”

“You did.”

“I didn't.”

“You are a terrible liar.”

“I've been told.”

The small moment disappeared quickly.

Gideon checked the windows, then returned to the table.

“We leave at first light.”

“Where?”

“Bitter Creek.”

Abigail stared.

“The men who threatened us just came from Bitter Creek.”

“Yes.”

“So naturally we're going toward them.”

“We need to confirm the deed.”

“Tonight you told me it was recorded elsewhere.”

“It is. But Caleb never completed the local transfer.”

“Why?”

“Probably because he was trying to stay alive.”

That silenced her.

Gideon unfolded a map.

“If we file proof of your ownership with the territorial land office, Vane loses his best argument that the Whitaker claim was abandoned.”

“And if we don't?”

“He'll keep claiming it.”

Abigail sat.

“So we ride into town and announce that I am exactly the woman he's been waiting fourteen years to find.”

“Yes.”

She looked at him incredulously.

Gideon added, “Quietly.”

Abigail laughed despite herself.

“You have a strange understanding of quiet.”

“So I've been told.”

She watched him study the map.

The man was maddening.

Reserved.

Blunt.

Almost impossible to read.

Yet when danger appeared, he had stepped between Abigail and three armed riders without hesitation.

She wondered whether he would have done the same for any woman Caleb Whitaker had asked him to protect.

The thought hurt more than it should.

“Gideon.”

He looked up.

“Did my father ask you to marry me?”

His face changed.

“No.”

“Did he ask you to find me a husband?”

“No.”

“What exactly did he ask?”

Gideon sat back.

“To keep the envelope. To give it to you if you ever came west. And if Vane learned who you were, to help you leave alive.”

“That was all?”

“Yes.”

Abigail studied him.

“Then why choose my matrimonial letter?”

“I told you.”

“Partly.”

He looked toward the stove.

Abigail waited.

Finally he said, “I had been alone eleven years.”

“That isn't an answer.”

“It is the beginning of one.”

He rubbed his thumb against a scar on the table.

“My parents are gone. My brother went south and never came back. I built this place because I thought solitude was simpler.”

Abigail understood that more than he knew.

“And then?”

“Then solitude got too quiet.”

The confession was spoken as though admitting weakness.

“I placed the notice.”

“How many women answered?”

“Twenty-three.”

Abigail blinked.

“Twenty-three?”

“Yes.”

“And you chose me because you recognized my name.”

“At first I opened your letter because I recognized the name.”

The distinction made her look at him.

“What made you answer?”

“You wrote that if I didn't expect a beauty, you wouldn't expect a prince.”

Abigail flushed.

“That was impertinent.”

“It was honest.”

“You could have chosen a younger woman.”

“Yes.”

“A prettier woman.”

His brow furrowed.

“That depends on who's looking.”

Abigail stared at him.

He seemed genuinely confused by her assumption.

She looked away first.

Gideon continued.

“One woman wrote four pages about curtains. Another wanted to know how many servants I kept.”

Abigail looked around the one-room cabin.

“I assume you disappointed her.”

“Didn't answer.”

“And me?”

“You asked how much firewood winter required.”

“I was trying to be practical.”

“I know.”

His eyes remained on hers.

“You asked whether the roof leaked, whether the nearest doctor knew childbirth, and whether I would allow a wife to keep money she earned herself.”

Abigail remembered.

“I expected that last question to offend you.”

“It did.”

Her heart sank.

Then Gideon added, “Offended me that you thought you needed permission.”

Abigail stared.

Something shifted between them.

Neither moved.

The cabin seemed suddenly very small.

Gideon broke eye contact first.

“We should sleep.”

Abigail looked at the single bed.

“So I noticed there is one problem.”

He followed her gaze.

“I'll take the floor.”

“You live here.”

“You've traveled seventeen days.”

“I am not stealing your bed.”

“You're not stealing it.”

“You're six feet four.”

“Six five.”

“The floor is barely six feet across.”

“I'll bend.”

Abigail folded her arms.

“You're stubborn.”

“So I've been told.”

“There seems to be a great deal you've been told.”

“Most of it wasn't complimentary.”

That time she did smile.

Her first genuine smile since Pennsylvania.

Gideon saw it.

He looked away so quickly she wondered whether she had imagined the softness in his eyes.

They slept little.

At dawn, Abigail made biscuits.

Not because she needed to earn breakfast.

Because she wanted biscuits.

When Gideon came inside after checking the stable, he stopped.

“You cooked.”

“Yes.”

“I said you didn't have to.”

“And I said I make good biscuits.”

He ate four.

Abigail did not mention it.

By midmorning they prepared to leave.

Before climbing into the wagon, Abigail returned to the cabin for her shawl.

Near the bed, she noticed the chest still open.

Her father's letters were inside.

Beside them lay several objects Gideon had collected from Caleb.

A pocketknife.

A broken watch.

A small Bible.

A wooden surveyor's ruler.

Abigail picked up the ruler.

Her father had used one just like it when she was a child.

She remembered sitting beside him while he drew property lines.

He would tap measurements against paper and say, “Land doesn't care what people promise, Abby. Put it in writing.”

Her throat tightened.

Then she noticed scratches along the edge.

Not random scratches.

Letters.

B.P. — N.W. — 17.

“Gideon.”

He entered.

“What?”

She held up the ruler.

“Did you see this?”

He took it.

His face sharpened.

“Black Pine.”

“What does seventeen mean?”

“I don't know.”

Abigail examined the ruler.

One end felt slightly loose.

She twisted it.

Nothing.

Gideon tried.

A narrow wooden cap came free.

Inside was a rolled strip of paper.

Both froze.

Gideon carefully pulled it out.

It was not the evidence Caleb had promised.

It was a hand-drawn map.

A trail through Black Pine Pass.

A circle marked near an abandoned survey cabin.

And one sentence.

WHAT VANE STOLE IS BURIED WHERE WATER RUNS UPHILL.

Abigail read it twice.

“What does that mean?”

Gideon's face had gone still.

“I know the place.”

Hope surged.

Then a smell reached them.

Smoke.

Not from the chimney.

Gideon ran outside.

Abigail followed.

Flames climbed the far side of the barn.

“Gideon!”

He grabbed a bucket.

Abigail ran for another.

For the next twenty minutes they fought the fire together.

By the time it died, half the barn roof was blackened.

The mules were safe.

The hay was not.

Gideon walked around the burned wall.

He stopped.

Abigail joined him.

A message had been carved into the wood with a knife.

LEAVE THE DEAD BURIED.

Abigail stared at the words.

Gideon turned toward her.

“We don't go to town first.”

She knew what he meant.

Black Pine Pass.

The hidden evidence.

Her father's final secret.

Abigail's fear remained.

But something else was growing beside it.

Anger.

For fourteen years Amos Vane had decided what Abigail was allowed to know.

He had stolen letters from her mother.

He had hunted her father.

Now his men had ridden to her home and burned Gideon's barn.

Abigail touched the carved warning.

Then she looked at Gideon.

“When do we leave?”

His eyes searched hers.

“You understand they may follow us.”

“Yes.”

“You understand Black Pine is dangerous even without them.”

“Yes.”

“You could still take the stagecoach east.”

Abigail's expression hardened.

“I spent thirty-two years making myself smaller because other people were uncomfortable when I took up space.”

She looked toward the mountains.

“I am done leaving places because a man wants them more than I do.”

For the first time, Gideon Miller smiled fully.

It changed his entire face.

“All right,” he said.

Abigail picked up the hidden map.

“Then let's find out what my father died trying to tell me.”

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